A night I will never forget. reviews
An awsome plot, but way to short on details in most areas
You missed every opportunity to put in some dialogue, thus making your short story rather dull.
ok pal gotta work on the editing
was that a story or just the cliff notes?
Um....how can you unstrap 1 strapless bra
I have never commented on a story EVER. But this definately earned it....It sucked
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"Whatever you do, stay away from him! I fear he could be dangerous!" said the mother. "Oh, he's never bothered anyone," Jerrold said. "But your Mom is right. Stay away from him. A beautiful young woman like you...."... |
Stories By Niche:
- indian
- short
- ghost
- porn
- scary
- bedtime
- bdsm
- spanking
- adult
- inspirational
- funny
- love
- xxx
- cuckold
- hot
- bondage
- motivational
- horror
- moral
- black
- romantic
- bible
- wedgie
- femdom
- real wife
- diaper
- sissy
- mind control
- gangbang
- milf
- threesome
- success
- female masturbation
- christmas
- foot fetish
- erotica
- bullying
- dirty
- naughty
- taboo
- fuck
- blowjob
- facesitting