A blade for Ryan reviews
You had a lot of spelling mistakes. Big ones especially. Mrs. not mr's, prinipal not prencipal, you switched between he and she when talking abou the principle so I was constantly confused whether or not they were female, and towards the end you started calling Ryan, Bryan and that was weird. It was an intersting story but the spelling errors bothered me a lot.
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Tragic tale of love that was never was allowed to live... |
Stories By Niche:
- indian
- short
- ghost
- porn
- scary
- bedtime
- bdsm
- spanking
- adult
- inspirational
- funny
- love
- xxx
- cuckold
- hot
- bondage
- motivational
- horror
- moral
- black
- romantic
- bible
- wedgie
- femdom
- real wife
- diaper
- sissy
- mind control
- gangbang
- milf
- threesome
- success
- female masturbation
- christmas
- foot fetish
- erotica
- bullying
- dirty
- naughty
- taboo
- fuck
- blowjob
- facesitting