A Day in the Weight Room reviews
the beginning is great... but after the first two paragraphs the sex just happens way too quickly. I would reccomend re-writing this story; keeping the beginning but allowing for some time for your characters to ease into the sex. It will seem a lot more realistic, and the sex will be a sort of climax that your readers will have to look forward to.
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Found out love watching my wife another man... |
Stories By Niche:
- indian
- short
- ghost
- porn
- scary
- bedtime
- bdsm
- spanking
- adult
- inspirational
- funny
- love
- xxx
- cuckold
- hot
- bondage
- motivational
- horror
- moral
- black
- romantic
- bible
- wedgie
- femdom
- real wife
- diaper
- sissy
- mind control
- gangbang
- milf
- threesome
- success
- female masturbation
- christmas
- foot fetish
- erotica
- bullying
- dirty
- naughty
- taboo
- fuck
- blowjob
- facesitting